Sunday, March 8, 2009

The rancid propaganda chewed on the swelled bicuspid.

Zachary's first story using paragraphs:

The Apple of Oz

there ones was a apple. then there was a banana. then frensh fries.

Butt [very funny, Zachary] there was a proBlem with the apple. the apple had spots.

then a wicked wich came. the wicked wich poured a Bucket of water over the apple.

Then the apple died.

The End.

2 comments:

Alex said...

So, my son created a mashup of Snow White and The Wizard of Oz with a dash of ironic role-reversal thrown in for good measure. I'm so proud.

Mom or Dad said...

Looks really yummy..Butt, we don't want to taste
it!

Very enjoyable and creative story.